?

Log in

No account? Create an account
Something Special (Obi/Ani fic) - alley_skywalker [entries|archive|friends|userinfo]
alley_skywalker

[ userinfo | livejournal userinfo ]
[ archive | journal archive ]

Something Special (Obi/Ani fic) [Nov. 17th, 2006|11:10 pm]
alley_skywalker
[Tags|, , , , , ]
[Current Mood |contentcontent]

Title: Something Special
Author: Alley_Skywalker
Paring: Obi/Ani
Raiting: PG
Disclaimer: I don't own the boys, sadly. George Lucas does so go bug him. 
Summary: Obi-Wan doesn't know what it is about Anakin. But it's something. Something special. 
Notes: Four words, my friends: short, sweet, painless, pointless. Comments, as always, are loved!




There’s something in the way he smiles. There’s something in the way he laughs. Obi-Wan doesn’t know what it is but it’s something. Something special.

 

There’s something in the way his eyes sparkle when he’s flying full speed through the crowded space lanes of Coruscant. There’s something in the way his eyes are so captivating when their eyes meet. Obi-Wan doesn’t know what it is but it’s something. Something special.

 

There’s something about the way he says, “No one will ever hurt you. I promise.”  There’s something about the way his voice is so calming and the way it sends shivers up one’s spine. Obi-Wan doesn’t know what it is but it’s something. Something special.

 

There is something about the way it feels when their hands brush past each other carelessly. There’s something about the way the shortest embrace in the name of friendship can be the most desired thing. Obi-Wan doesn’t know what it is but it’s something. Something special.

 

There’s something about the way his body is so perfect, especially when he’s doing katas. There’s something about the way his hair looks so soft in the dying sunlight. Obi-Wan doesn’t know what it is but it’s something. Something Special.

 

There’s something in the way he feels about Anakin. Obi-Wan doesn’t know what it is. But it just might be love.

 

LinkReply

Comments:
From: masterglory
2006-11-18 07:12 am (UTC)
Something called love!! Mmmmmm, sometimes I prefer PG more then NC17 because it's full of feelings.

Yes, I'm an incurable romantic!

Beautiful, short and open to another chapter.

p.s. please note to the writing, it's so...little, I had difficult to read it
(Reply) (Thread)
[User Picture]From: alley_skywalker
2006-11-18 11:58 pm (UTC)
I'm a romanic too! Glad to see another one arund here :) Oh and I changed the font too :)
(Reply) (Parent) (Thread)
From: grayissexy
2006-11-18 07:17 am (UTC)
Sweet and lovely!
(Reply) (Thread)
[User Picture]From: alley_skywalker
2006-11-18 11:59 pm (UTC)
Thanks!
(Reply) (Parent) (Thread)
[User Picture]From: catsgocrazy
2006-11-18 10:45 am (UTC)
Lovestruck Obi is adorable!! :D
(Reply) (Thread)
[User Picture]From: alley_skywalker
2006-11-19 12:00 am (UTC)
I know! Love struck Obi is always fun...especially when he's in love with Ani ;)
(Reply) (Parent) (Thread)
[User Picture]From: dragonlit
2006-11-18 05:53 pm (UTC)
Alley, this is so lovely, so sweet. And yes, the stories don't always have to be graphic to be very effective. Good to see you here on lj in addition to tfn! I have different user name over there, but I see you around the community and ff resource.
(Reply) (Thread)
[User Picture]From: alley_skywalker
2006-11-19 12:01 am (UTC)
Thnks for readin!

You're on TFN under a diff screen name? Nay I ask which one?
(Reply) (Parent) (Thread)
[User Picture]From: dragonlit
2006-11-19 12:06 am (UTC)
Sure you can ask - PadwanKayla! I see you around lots. I tend to lurk a lot more these days though. Drifted off to the HP world for a while but the SW boys are still my favorites.
(Reply) (Parent) (Thread)
[User Picture]From: alley_skywalker
2006-11-19 07:49 pm (UTC)
Oh! I think I've seen you around :)
(Reply) (Parent) (Thread)
[User Picture]From: dragonlit
2006-11-19 12:08 am (UTC)
I'm going to friend you if that's okay, as I'd love to continue reading your stuff! Meant to say that in my last reply.
(Reply) (Parent) (Thread)
[User Picture]From: hyypchick
2006-11-18 08:49 pm (UTC)
This is what the second thing I've read from you? And I am totally in love with what you do.

You put so much emotion into what you write and I am transported to wherever you want to take me, and here I'm feeling for Anakin what Obi-wan is feeling for Anakin.

This may be short and sweet but it is far from pointless; wonderful piece of writing.

You alley are something special in the AO fandom X
(Reply) (Thread)
[User Picture]From: alley_skywalker
2006-11-19 12:02 am (UTC)
Aww, thanks! You're such a boost to my ego lol.
(Reply) (Parent) (Thread)
[User Picture]From: ani_harths_obi
2006-11-18 11:47 pm (UTC)
Another fellow romantic! yes!!

I love this! It's so short yet perfectly to the point. I agree with masterglory that a PG is often better than an NC-17 and it's stories like yours that make me think this. It's beautifully poetic!

xxx
(Reply) (Thread)
[User Picture]From: alley_skywalker
2006-11-19 12:04 am (UTC)
Yes I'm quite the romantic. Admittedly I have done very little graphic stuff w/ het so the prospect of attempting to write slash NC-17/R stuff really freaks me out. And in any case i love the sappy/cuddly fics lol.

Thanks for readin! I'm glad you liked it :)
(Reply) (Parent) (Thread)
[User Picture]From: ani_harths_obi
2006-11-19 12:23 am (UTC)
Hope you don't mind that I friended you!

NC-17/R slash can be tricky to write but I'm sure you'd be able to do it! I'd be happy to read anything you write before posting.

Keep the sappy/cuddly love coming though, you rock at it!

xxx
(Reply) (Parent) (Thread)
[User Picture]From: ludagurl3d
2006-11-19 07:09 am (UTC)
Alley you are becoming famous...go girl!
(Reply) (Thread)
[User Picture]From: alley_skywalker
2006-11-19 07:51 pm (UTC)
lol, Dee! Yea well I try lol.
(Reply) (Parent) (Thread)
From: (Anonymous)
2006-11-19 12:50 pm (UTC)

Subarashi (Great) ~ !

Wow - (gasp). You're really talented !! : D
Everything you say here in this fanfic about Obi-Wan and Anakin is so - well, so poetic !
In my head, it was really that voice of Obi-Wan played by Ewan who read this . . . etto (er) . . . poem.
Hmm . . . so, to Obi-Wan, Anakin IS someone special, I think. : )

From Sakura
(Reply) (Thread)
[User Picture]From: alley_skywalker
2006-11-19 07:52 pm (UTC)

Re: Subarashi (Great) ~ !

Thanks! Yea I'd like to think that Anakin really was something special to Obi-Wan :)
(Reply) (Parent) (Thread)